miércoles, 1 de junio de 2011

Blog 1: 2.3 Shoes

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  1. INTRODUCTION:
    Let me tell you the process that Mary Wale use to make her own shoes.
    SUPPORTING SENTENCES:
    FIRST,you need the materials, the materialS that you need are : cotton or wool , silk , brocade, velvet, bukram ,felt, Fabric Stiffener ,and Heels.
    THEN,you start creting your own model you cut in the velvet or wool the form of a shoe any type of shoe you want. Then you sew and put the plataform.
    FINALLY, you paste de heel an you make any arrangement you need to do.
    CONCLUSION:
    It is to funny to make your own shoes , you can have your own colection like Mary Wales.

    shirley minera , code 10

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  2. INTRODUCTION
    If you want have a beautiful shoes you need these tips.
    SUPPORTING SENTENCES
    First, you have to see the color and the texture that your shoes will be
    Then you have to see the shoes' size because if the shoes if very small for you, your time with your shoes will be ugly for you and your feet.
    Finally choose the shoes that you most like
    CONCLUSION
    With these tips you will have the most beautiful shoes ever.

    Lourdes Recinos code 11

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  3. Lately shoes

    Introduction
    In the world there are all kinds of shoes like the ones I am going to mention.
    Body
    Everyone uses shoes these are some that everyone wears lately.
    They are: high-heeled: footwear that raises the heels, typically 2 inches or more, sneaker: these shoes are for sports specific shoes worn for various sports or you can use casual, slingbacks are shoes which are secured by a strap behind the heel, and ballet flats: derived from a woman's soft ballet slipper, with a very thin heel or the appearance of no heel at all.
    Conclusion
    Those were the kind of shoes everyone wears lately you can search them in shoes store and use them. Hope you like these shoes and try to wear them.

    Andy Lai
    Code: 8

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  4. TOPICSENTENCE: A lot of women around the world love to buy a lot of kinds of shoes. BODY: Women often buy heels to look taller and flirty. Other women prefer to buy smaller shoes because it is more comfortable. Currently the types of shoes can describe the type of person each one is. If you use tennis may be you are an athletic person. If you like the heels you are flirty women.
    There are a lot of shoe´s colors and you can perfectly combine them with your clothe. You can also choose different styles, so you don´t look alike everyday.
    Now a day, when you go to buy shoes to a shoes´ store you can find a variety if shoes. It is like when you go to buy clothe and you can see all the clothe but you can´t decide what to buy. CONCLUSION: Everyone has its own style, but the type of shoes that you wear can give you a touch of glamour.
    Adriana Cojulún. CODE:5

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  5. INTRODUCCION:
    if you want a beutiful shoes follow this steps
    BODY:
    first you need to know what type of shoes you need like comfortable.
    then you have to select what color do you need maybe you have guide of type of color of your cloth.
    finally you choose that shoes that has to confortable and apropiated color or the color you need!
    CONCLUDING SENTENCES:
    if you follow this steps you will have a nice shoes!

    ANDREA AGUILAR CODE:1

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  6. INTRODUCTION:
    Today I am going to share with you some ideas about how to know what shoes you may buy, following this steps.
    SUPPORTING IDEAS:
    First, Your money after buying some shoes you have to apart some special money only for your shoes. Next, look your cloth what are the colors you use the most, and also your purses so you combine your shoes and your purses. Then, you look for shoes that doesn't hurt you and fit you exactly so you con control them more if they are hells. And some tips, if you buy hells start with little ones not to high if not they would hurt you, and then you start using more and more high.
    CONCLUSION:
    Buying shoes may seem easily, but be carefull and follow these steps and you woldn´t get lost, good look buying your perfect shoes. :)

    KAREN ENRÍQUEZ
    Code: 6

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  7. Girls don´t forget to capitalize the initial letter and proper nouns. Be also careful with your spelling and grammar structures!

    Thanks for your participation in the first blog!
    Ms. Celeste

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