miércoles, 1 de junio de 2011

Blog 1: 2.1 Any kind of music

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  1. Hi Miss Celeste.
    This is the page of my blog.
    http://melissashomeworkandart.tumblr.com/
    Hope you enjoy it!
    Have a good weekend :D
    Melissa Villeda.

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  2. It was wonderful Melissa. Congratulations!

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  3. Hi miss celeste!

    There are different kinds of music. The one I like the most is pop because it is calm, but at the same time, it is full of rythm.
    I enjoy listening music because it is a way in wich I can express all my feelings and thoughts.
    It doesn't matter what kind of music you like, inspiration is inside you!

    Ma. Fernanda Orellana

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  4. Hey Miss Celeste, here's the link to my Tumblr in which I have my homework:
    http://musicgrammarhmwk.tumblr.com/
    hope you like it ;)
    Isabel Lemus
    9th grade I
    code: 10

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  5. Music
    Topic Sentence:
    I really love music, it makes me feel good whenever I'm mad or sad. That's why I will tell you some of the types of music I like.
    Supporting Details:
    Pop is one of the common music we all hear. It usually contains technological innovations.
    Reggeaton it's nowadays the most heard type of music. Reggaeton's predecessor originated in Panama. It is an influence to the society.
    Merengue it's originally played with strings' intruments. But actually they play it with other instruments. It procedes from Caribe and also from Republica Dominicana.
    Hip hop began in the South Bronx of New York City.The term rap is often used synonymously with hip hop. Rappers may write, memorize, or improvise their lyrics and perform their works in a capela or with music.
    Conclding Sentence:
    Those are some of the types f music I like and I love to hear. I wish you like it.

    Melissa Maxaiegos
    2.1

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  6. Hi Miss Celeste Here is my paragraph.

    TOPIC SENTENCE:
    Life can show us different types of music.Buy there is on type in specific I really like,It is Pop music.

    BODY:
    Pop music is a very beautiful type of music.I really like it cause i can dance. Its a type of music that lots of artists sing like Lady Gaga,Enrique Iglesias,LMFAO etc. For me this is the best type of music but I will mention another types like: Country,Techno,Reggeatton,Balads and lots more.

    CONCLUDING SENTENCE:
    This just a little bit of types of music hope you learned more about this.

    Maria Jose Garzaro
    Clue:9

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  7. Hi Miss Celeste :)

    Music

    There are a lot of types of music.Music has a different kinds of rythm.Some of them are very sticky,others are calm and others are noisy.The one like is pop because it has a nice rythm. Listening music helps you to express your feelings.To many people music is an important part of their life.

    Sofia Diaz

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  8. Hi miss Celeste! remember that I already published my comment, but I do it wrong so here is the new paragraph.

    Music is part of our life. We express all our feelings and thoughts in it.
    There are different kinds of music:
    The one I like the most is pop because it is calm, but at the same time, with a lot of rythm.
    Teenagers usuallly listen rock, reggeatton, techno, etc. We could say that "it is the music of the moment".
    We enjoy singing and dancing any kind of music.
    In conclusion, music is our life doesn't matter what kind of it!

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  9. Hello Miss. Celeste, here is my paragraph,

    Types of music

    There are diferente types of music in the world, here I will mention you some types:

    The music can be pop like the music that makes a lot of artists, it is for the people that like to dance. Electronic that is for people that like to dance like robot, because the rithm is like that. Romantic that is for the persons that like to express their very strong feelings. Clasic that is for persons that have culture, and it is calm and relaxing. And last Rock that is the one for persons that are wild, happy etc.

    There are a lot of types of music, more that the ones I had mention you, but in conclusion the music is part of our life we want it or not.


    Hillary Melendez
    Code:12

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  10. Hi miss!!! I can acces to the page!! yeah... Here es my paragraph:

    Kinds of music:
    The music is a form of art. It can expresse our feelings as well emotions in a melodious and pleasant way.
    There exist different types of music, that help in soothing one’s disturbed soul, in the growth of concentration, and also enliven us to live life to the fullest. Exist a varied types of music, that reads the soul and feelings of the person that is listening it.
    Here you can find a list of genres:
    Classic
    Rock
    Metal
    Hip-hop
    Trance
    Jazz
    Folk
    Techno
    Opera
    Pop
    Reaggeton
    Salsa
    Merenge
    BLues
    Etc.
    Thanks to the humanity, exist a lot of music for any momment of your life. With this you can feel identify with it. Music is part of our lives an we need to like it and espress our feelings through it. I love music and I know you wiil love it too if yoa can find the sense to all the music you heard...

    Cristina Ruiz
    9th. 1
    Code: 16

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  11. hi miss celeste this my paragarph:

    The Animals:

    When God created man also created animals for man to be friends with the animals. Of course there are domestic and wild animals are for the domestic to salavajes man and made ​​them to live somewhere away from the man because they are wild and have to live depends on your race.

    wildlife: It is a great danger that the exticion because as we have no need of them so we kill them or use them for decoration. Why there had tantans races as before so some wild animals are not wild and that we remove their habitat and become domestic.

    domestic animals: If they can live with the man and there are a lot of domestic animals such as cats, dogs, fish, rabbits and so on.
    Until they can become man's best friend is the dog as
    so best care for the animals to protect them because they also protect them.

    andrea garcia
    9th.1
    code:8

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  12. Miss Celeste! Here is my second paragraph about "Animals"

    Topic Sentence:
    There are alive beings named Animals.Animals are not like humas they have soo much different aspects.

    Body:
    One of the most obvious aspects is that animals can't speak they only make sounds. There are many types of animals like aquatic,aerial,terrestrial,domestic,wild. The different kind of animals also live in different habitats;Like for aquatics: Ocean or wild: Jungle.

    CONCLUDING SENTENCE:
    Hopefully with this paragraph you learn more about that creatures,animals.

    MariaJose Garzaro
    2nd I
    clue:9

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  13. Girls can you publish again your paragraphs about animals in the new blog, please...
    thank you!
    Ms. Celeste

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  14. Girls don´t forget to capitalize the initial letter and proper nouns. Be also careful with your spelling and grammar structures!

    Thanks for your participation in the first blog!
    Ms. Celeste

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