Even though men and women have many similarities, they are also different in several ways. For example, both men and women can have friends, but their relationships are very different. For women, it’s sometimes difficult to make friends, and they use to criticize more, even their own friends. In the other hand, men make friends more easily and they are much more loyal. Another difference they have is their feelings and the way they express. Women are more sensible and they can express better. In contrast, men also have feelings, but they don’t listen to their hearts and they have difficulty on expressing what they feel. Other aspect in which they differ is in their likes. They might sometimes have similar likes, but they’ll never be exactly the same. Females usually like shopping, chatting and calm things. However, males prefer extreme stuff, such as sports, video games, and music. In conclusion, men and women are very different, but that’s what makes interesting knowing other people, that you’ll never find someone exactly as you.
Final Draft: A sister and friend have several aspects in common. First, both support you in every goal you want to reach. A second way they are also alike is that they love you as you are.with your weakenes and qualities. Another thing they have in common, is that they want the best for you. That´s why they always want to know how do you feel,in a problem, if you have a dificulty in a topic they explain you. And the last thing they do the best, is taking the best of you.
Hi miss Celeste, here is the link of my paragraph.
Final Draft:
Bob Marley vrs. The Beatles:
Topic Sentence: The best singers ever. They were good singer from the history. They have lots of similarities but in this paragraph,we will talk about the differences. Keep reading, and you'll know everything about them.
Body: Bob Marley was one of the greatest reggae singers from the history. He was from Jamaica, and his songs expressed love, and things that he felt. But the Beatles, are so much different. They were a group of four members and their names were: Paul McCartney, Jonh Lennon, and other two boys. They were from England and they sang pop music, and they expressed all the feelings they had, or left.
Concluding Sentence:
It doesn't matter all the differences they had, but both were part of the greatest singers of the history, and we will listen to them, for some years more.
Ok Miss Celeste, here is my last paragraph:
ResponderEliminarEven though men and women have many similarities, they are also different in several ways. For example, both men and women can have friends, but their relationships are very different. For women, it’s sometimes difficult to make friends, and they use to criticize more, even their own friends. In the other hand, men make friends more easily and they are much more loyal. Another difference they have is their feelings and the way they express. Women are more sensible and they can express better. In contrast, men also have feelings, but they don’t listen to their hearts and they have difficulty on expressing what they feel. Other aspect in which they differ is in their likes. They might sometimes have similar likes, but they’ll never be exactly the same. Females usually like shopping, chatting and calm things. However, males prefer extreme stuff, such as sports, video games, and music. In conclusion, men and women are very different, but that’s what makes interesting knowing other people, that you’ll never find someone exactly as you.
Diana Barrios
code:2
Hi miss!!! here is my paragraph......
ResponderEliminarFinal Draft:
A sister and friend have several aspects in common. First, both support you in every goal you want to reach. A second way they are also alike is that they love you as you are.with your weakenes and qualities. Another thing they have in common, is that they want the best for you. That´s why they always want to know how do you feel,in a problem, if you have a dificulty in a topic they explain you. And the last thing they do the best, is taking the best of you.
Cristina Ma. Ruiz Marín
code:16
9th 1
Hi miss Celeste, here is the link of my paragraph.
ResponderEliminarFinal Draft:
Bob Marley vrs. The Beatles:
Topic Sentence:
The best singers ever. They were good singer from the history. They have lots of similarities but in this paragraph,we will talk about the differences. Keep reading, and you'll know everything about them.
Body:
Bob Marley was one of the greatest reggae singers from the history. He was from Jamaica, and his songs expressed love, and things that he felt. But the Beatles, are so much different. They were a group of four members and their names were: Paul McCartney, Jonh Lennon, and other two boys. They were from England and they sang pop music, and they expressed all the feelings they had, or left.
Concluding Sentence:
It doesn't matter all the differences they had, but both were part of the greatest singers of the history, and we will listen to them, for some years more.
Melissa Villeda Quiñónez
Code: 18
9th. 1